Aleia Jucei [Sugar Magic]

[Aleia]

Name: Sugar Magic
Type: Holder
Element/Aspect: Earth
Description:
This particular magic is more deadly than it sounds. In its most practical use, it makes baking sweets a little easier by giving control of sugar. The user is capable of controlling sugar is the simplest of terms. This involves causing sugar to swarm around the user, to creating hard compressed bricks of sugar to launch at others. It does not allow the user to create sugar from the air so it requires an external source to provide the sugar. In higher levels, this magic can extract sugar from any source that contains it but at the moment it requires a plain source of pure sugar.
Side Effects: Elongated use of this magic can cause increased energy but the longer the energy use, the longer the crash rate. At the current level it is only minor fatigue.

Sugar Rush
Tier: Base Spell
Sigils/Sigil Slots: 0/0
Magic Cost: 10 (5 per post)
Type: Utility
Element: Earth
Range: Self
Requirements: External source of powdered sugar
Effect: The user inhales a puff of enchanted sugar that enhances their energy through mouth and/or nose. It allows temporary increase in speed and perception (From 10 mph to 12 mph, as for perception not enough to see flying bullets but it definitely makes the world seem clearer than before) as long as it is maintained whenever it begins to weaken. To farther clarify on perception, the user becomes more aware of their surroundings. They begin to see smaller details in front of them. Each time the user maintains this spell, the larger quantities of sugar will be required. Once the sugar enters the body, it cannot be retrieved. Long uses of this spell can cause fatigue for an extended period of time. The ability does not stack upon itself in terms of buffs.
Cooldown: 2 Post

Sugar Ball
Tier: Base Spell
Sigils/Sigil Slots: 0/0
Magic Cost: 10
Type: Offensive
Element: Earth
Range: Ranged (10 Meters)
Requirements: Must have an external source of pure sugar.
Effect: The user creates up to 3 compressed balls (3 inches in diameter) of hard sugar and capable of launching it in high speed 10 meters in a straight line within their view at approximately 5 m/s. These sugar are as hard as a rock at best of times. They 'explode' on impact by that I mean they turn into a cloud of sugar dust on impact. It can cause blinding in the best of circumstances but it is still sugar in the end.
Cooldown: 2 Posts

Gathering of Sugar
Tier: Base Spell
Sigils/Sigil Slots: 0/0
Magic Cost: 10 (5 per post)
Type: Utility
Element: Earth
Range: Ranged (5 Meter in Diameter)
Requirements:
Effect: The user gathers PURE sugar that might have fallen to the ground or hands in the air. From there the user can allow a small veil of sugar to surround her in which she can choose to recover back into a container or proceed to use the actual Sugar Veil. Larger molecules of sugar can be converted into powder sugar form during this time as well for use with Sugar Rush.
Cooldown: 1 Post

Light Sugar Veil
Tier: Base Spell
Sigils/Sigil Slots: 0/0
Magic Cost: 10 (5 per post)
Type: Defensive
Element: Earth
Range: Self
Requirements: Gathering of Sugar must occur and large amounts of sugar is required.
Effect: The user surrounds herself with a high density veil of sugar capable of weakening light blows. It is still just plain sugar and it does not guarantee any form of real protection. It is similar to have another layer of clothing at this level. The more sugar the user uses, the higher the defense but the Light Sugar Veil is at best the level of an extra layer of snow jacket. Note, it does not protect the user from the elements such as heavy rain, snow, heat, etc.
Cooldown: 2 Posts

Detect Sugar
Tier: Base Spell
Sigils/Sigil Slots: 0/0
Magic Cost: 10
Type: Utility
Element: Earth
Range: Ranged (5 Meters in Diameter)
Requirements: N/A
Effect: The user can detect the presence of external sugar in the immediate vicinity(like cookies!). That is pretty much it.
Cooldown: 1 Post

[Game Master]

Magic: Approved. Very unique and original.

Sugar Rush
- Delete this "(Leave how it is until you've bought a sigil/sigil slot)"
- Change "+5" to "5 upkeep" or "5 continuous" or "5 per post". You can use other words similar to it, just as long as it indicates it's an ongoing spell.
- No percentages please. They become really vague when no one knows what the standard number is. Since we've established that humans run (on average) 10 mph, state that the speed is 12 mph. As for perception, say that she is able to see small objects (give a size) from 5 meters away.
- Increase the cooldown to 2 posts.
- Change "support" to Utility. That was a mistake in the template. They're the same thing.

Sugar Ball
- Since they're so small, I think I can allow 10 m/s but I'll have to talk to Sokuseki about it. Keep in mind that we might have to drop it down to 5 m/s.

Gathering of Sugar
- Change "+5" to "5 upkeep" or "5 continuous" or "5 per post". You can use other words similar to it, just as long as it indicates it's an ongoing spell.
- Change "support" to Utility. That was a mistake in the template. They're the same thing.
- Drop this down to 1 post cooldown.

Light Sugar Veil
- Change "+5" to "5 upkeep" or "5 continuous" or "5 per post". You can use other words similar to it, just as long as it indicates it's an ongoing spell.

Detect Sugar
- Change "support" to Utility. That was a mistake in the template. They're the same thing.
- So... external sources like sugar canes? Nothing internal like detecting the sugars in a person's body, right? Sorry, I know the description is very straight to the point but short/one-liners throw me off.

[Aleia]

Patching complete! Thanks for the help!

[Game Master]

Sugar Rush
- Whoa there. I think you misunderstood what I was saying about the perception. It does not, in a sense, increase the range because you can already see 5 meters in front of you. What I meant was if you were trying to read a line of words/sentences or define the details of a small object from 5 meters away then you are able to see it as if it was right in front of you.

Sugar Ball: ::P E N D I N G::

Gathering of Sugar: Approved.

Light Sugar Veil: Approved.

Detect Sugar: Approved.

Also, please take out the "+" symbol. I count that as "adding" to the initial magic cost, and that's not what we're doing. lol.

[Aleia]

I think I have it now!

[Game Master]

Sugar Rush: Approved.

Sugar Ball is still pending, but you can now use all the other spells. When I talk to Sokuseki and come to a decision, I'll either edit this post saying that everything's approved or I'll PM you to change the speed and then bump the thread when you've finished editing.

We have decided that you need to drop your speed down to 5 m/s please.

[Aleia]

Okies it has dropped!

[Game Master]

Congratulations! Your magic is fully approved. Have fun! This has now been moved to the Public Archives.

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